This is substantive or developmental editing. Involves looking at the big-picture stuff. Characterization, including character development, plot (flow and plot holes), pacing, voice, setting, theme, structure, and world building in fantasy novels.
Feedback will be in the form of an editorial letter, as well as comments and suggestions within the manuscript.
I’ll also help with brainstorming. Facilitate the development of a novel from beginning to end, ensuring that every action the characters engage in remains true to their character, and their decisions have a high potential to be effective in keeping the reader hooked.